Book Review: Order of the Dimensions

Title: Order of the Dimensions

Author and Publisher: Irene Helenowski

Copyright: 2012

Genre: Science Fiction

The author of this book, Irene Helenowski, contacted me through Book Blogs and asked me if I would be interested in doing a review of this book in exchange for a free copy.

When I was 8, I daydreamed often that I had a twin somewhere in the world. I’d imagine that when I brushed my teeth, she was brushing hers too. It was an 8-year old’s take on parallel universes. Theories about parallel universes and multiverses assum­­e that that each choice a person makes splits her world in two or more worlds – one universe existing where a person takes option A and another universe for option B.

If you’ve seen the movie Sliding Doors, you’ve seen the theory in action. In the movie, the heroine lives two different lives based on a single action (choice) of whether or not she catches a train. When she catches the train, she falls in love and is eventually hit by a car. When she misses the train, she breaks up with her live in boyfriend who she caught cheating on her. Two separate outcomes or universes created simply by the timing of a train.

Irene Helenowski manages not two, but many universes or dimensions in her story, “Orderof Dimensions.” The heroine, Jane Kremowski, is a physics grad student whose professor has created a machine that can take people to other dimensions. Jane secretly tests the machine after hours when her colleagues have gone home. In the main dimension, her parents are dead from a car crash that also debilitated her cousin. But when Jane jumps to other dimension, she finds that in some dimensions  her cousin is mentally healthy and that her parents are alive.

Jane’s dimension hopping is innocent play until an evil physicist, Dr. Zelov, learns of the machine and decides to use it to rule the world.  Jane attempts to thwart his mania.  A long drawn out struggle ensues with Jane and her friends bouncing back and forth through multiple dimensions hunting down Dr. Zelov.

The story’s premise has potential that could be achieved with better story structure. The story was hard to follow. Events often repeated without advancing the plot. The world building of the various dimensions is weak, deteriorating the story’s overall comprehension. 

With a little editing, the book could become an enjoyable guidebook for the do's and don’ts of cross-universal travel. String theory, quantum physics, neutrinos, and quarks are fascinating subjects because of their infinite possibilities of time travel and various life outcomes. In time, the theoretical physicists may morph into applicable physicists; a group is currently pursuing making time travel a reality. I’m holding on to hope. In my 5th grade school picture, I emulated Pat Benatar. 

Book Review: Matched by Ally Condie

Matched by Ally Condie is a story with an aftertaste. For weeks after reading the story I contemplated the world that Condie had dreamed up and how life would be if her fiction was our reality. Condie's dystopian novel drags readers through a society that enforces personal restraint by removing the burdens of choice. Behavioral economist Dan Ariely mentions in a lecture on restraint that rules - religious, civic, personal – coral people into good behaviors (eating right, driving safely, etc.). Condie's fictional Society demonstrates the extreme of rules or restraints through the life of seventeen year old Cassia and mirrors what Ariely discloses - that restraints and their concomitant good behaviors often come at the sacrifice of personal freedom. The eternal questions are how much personal freedom should a person give up to live in a civilized society and who determines the definition of civilized?

Condie addresses these eternal questions by creating a society that statistically determines its citizens' nutrition, careers, mates, family structure, and lifespan. The society that Cassia lives in is aptly named the Society. The Society's intentions are ones universally embraced – healthy citizens, no crime, happiness. They have statistics that support their invasive intervention in their citizens' lives. Cancer has almost been eradicated and each citizen contributes to the communal structure. Cassia's world is partially enviable. How wonderful would it be if no one you knew suffered with cancer, if every person worked to the best of their ability, and most importantly, if a hot meal was prepared for you everyday, three times per day?! Just think, no cooking, in my house that means no smoke alarms blaring!

The utopia of never having to make a meal again tarnishes paragraph by paragraph with each squeeze on Cassia's freedom. Meals are delivered, yet Society has purposely organized the farm-to-table process to not allow any one person to be self-sustaining. Only select people know how to plant, others to harvest, and others to prepare food; the full process is an enigma to the Society's citizens. Every activity has been likewise dismembered; creating an efficient but dependent community. Further, all communications are minutely monitored. No one has paper for writing or creating. All writing is done via a keyboard and a computer monitor that is in the middle of the living space provided to each family. Thoughts are the only thing allowed to be private and even those have been influenced by evangelizing respect of the Society. Only 100 paintings, poems, and songs remain from the Society's salvaged apocalyptic past; a dearth of creative expression.

Cassia's belief in the Society begins to erode with the death of her grandfather; another controlled event. When its citizens turn 80 years old, they are put to rest for all eternity. Statistically after 80, all sorts of dreadful aging begins in earnest. Aging that the Society deems unnecessary. On his deathbed, Cassia's grandfather encourages her to think, to question; a mental exercise that the Society has gone to great lengths to prevent its citizens from doing. In a compact mirror case that he bestows to Cassia, he shows her a hidden compartment that contains two non-sanctioned poems, one of which is Dylan Thomas's “Do Not Go Gentle Into That Good Night.” He, and his mother before him, rescued the poems from destruction at a risk to their family's security and well-being. The import of her grandfather's risk and words prod Cassia to re-examine her assumptions.

Questioning authority directs Cassia toward doubting the Society's benevolence and its determined mate for her, her childhood best friend Xander. A rare computer glitch shows an alternative match for Cassia, Ky. The Society's attempt to suppress the accident vandalizes Cassia's naïve image of the Society. Her friendship and eventual romantic involvement with Ky exposes her to the odious, secretive actions that the Society is willing to take to ensure conformity. Cassia's final attachment to the Society's rules and propaganda are wrenched free when they ship Ky off to fight a pernicious war.

Matched is thought provoking, despite the, at times, stiff and droning writing. Other reviews reference Lowry's The Givers as a better read for accessing a similar dystopian story. Cassia and Ky's confrontation with Society's machinations continue on in Crossed, Match's sequel.